Author of thrillers, two mystery series, and short stories,
Mary Keliikoa is a Silver Falchion finalist, and a
Foreword Indies award finalist.
She is also a Silver and Bronze Award winner.
A Shamus and CLUE finalist, and Lefty, Agatha and Anthony nominee.
She lives in Washington, Hawaii, USA.
https://marykeliikoa.com
Jill: What is your literary/publishing history?
Mary: It’s been a long road! I started writing when I was 27. Co-wrote a novel with a friend that didn’t go anywhere, but I had the writing bug from that point on and wrote 3 more. When I was 35, however, I tucked my writing away so I could start a company with my husband. That consumed about 15 years. Although I’d dabble with my stories during that time, I didn’t have the energy to do much else.
In 2015 we sold that part of the company and I took that last novel I wrote when I was 35 and entered it into a contest called Pitch Wars. I was picked up by two mentors, and in 2017 signed with my first agent and debuted with DERAILED twenty years after first drafting it. DERAILED went on to be nominated for Best First Novel in several arenas. After that, I wrote two more Kelly Pruett books, and then jumped to the Misty Pines mystery series which is ongoing, and had a standalone, Don’t Ask Don’t Follow, that published last year.
Jill: Why did you choose to write crime novels?
Mary: From early on, I’ve been drawn to the justice system. My favorite shows as a kid were Adam 12, Columbo, Kojak and Perry Mason, and later Moonlighting. Later, right out of high school, I went to work as alegal secretary and then became a paralegal. I did that for 18 years. About that time, I also found many of mystill-today favorite authors, including Mary Higgins Clark, Faye Kellerman, J.A. Jance, and Sue Grafton.So, when I decided I’d like to write a novel, it was just natural that it would be in the crime genre.
Jill: How do you decide on a point-of-view?
Mary: Sometimes I just know because the character’s voice is so clear to me. But if there’s a question, I’ll write the first chapter in both first and then third to see which one feels right.
Jill: What draws you to the mystery genre?
Mary: Hands down, it’s the puzzle. It’s seeing all the pieces floating around and trying to figure out how they fit. Some things look like they should, but they don’t, and there’s such surprise in that which I enjoy.
Jill: What inspires your plots, antagonists, protagonists, and other characters?
Mary: Most of my books center around strong women who must overcome obstacles. As for the plot, I’m inspired by headlines and everyday news. Though sometimes it’s just a question I have that I need answered. Most of the time, the characters come to me with the story to tell and I’m just the transcriber.
Jill: Are minor characters important to your stories?
Mary: Absolutely. They’re the color of the story and they’re often a reflection of the main character, or an obstacle to understand or overcome for the protagonist.
Jill: Have any of your travel experiences crept into your settings?
Mary: My published novels are set in Portland and the Oregon coast, areas in which I’ve lived. My most recent draft of a novel I set on a cruise ship for part of the book and that was inspired by my travels as I do get to travel the world quite a bit. I also am currently looking to place a book that’s set in Hawaii. Definitely a travel destination, although I also have a home there.
Jill: Is there an actual Misty Pines?
Mary: There is not, but it is based on a place I grew up on at the Oregon coast. It’s just when I went to write the novel, the community felt too small, and I wanted to utilize more of a stretch of beach there, so I put a few cities together and called it Misty Pines. Many of the places referenced though are real to that area.
Jill: Kelly Pruett is a strong P.I. Is she modelled after anyone you know?
Mary: No one in real life, but I was a huge fan of Sue Grafton’s Kinsey Milhone, and she inspired the Kelly Pruett character.
Jill: How many sub-plots do you create for each book?
Mary: I usually have at least a couple of things happening that relate to the character or the relationships. For example, in my Misty Pines series, there is a relationship between Jax and his FBI agent ex-wife. Their cases often overlap, so there’s that negotiation and butting heads happening throughout the series. There’s also issues with Jax’s ex-partner, a detective in Portland, and the father to Jax’s current deputy. That often creates some tension and other elements. In the PI series, Kelly is juggling raising a deaf daughter and that creates all kinds of judgments and obstacles from her ex-mother-in-law and ex-husband, so that’s a subplot that plays along and intertwines with the main story as well.
Jill:
Which book was the most fun to write?Mary: My most favourite that I’ve written isn’t published, yet. It’s set in Hawaii and it’s about a woman who for reasons she doesn’t understand is compelled to help find young girls when they are taken to be trafficked. She lets nothing stand in her way, including the men who dare try, or the detective determined to see her in prison. Of course I loved the setting, but more than that, I loved the drive of the character and that for me is everything when I write. Second would be Deadly Tides in the Misty Pines series. It centers around a missing surf shop owner. I really enjoyed being able to utilize the surf culture at the Oregon coast, but since my husband is Hawaiian and was an avid surfer, it was fun to work with him on the details of the plot. And of course to give a nod to the beautiful Hawaiian culture.
Jill: How many drafts do you write on average?
Mary: It varies because I often work with an editor, but generally, three or four drafts before I let my beta readers have a peek. Then another couple after that.
Jill: Were there pitfalls and challenges along the way of your writing career?
Mary: There’s a lot of waiting and that’s a challenge for me because I can write fairly quickly. But what I do work on is just enjoying the journey of this. My books are published, I have readers, and that is a blessing. As long as I can keep telling my stories, the one thing I can control, I can feel satisfaction in that.
Jill: What keeps you in the chair?
Mary: I love story telling. I love coming back to my characters each day and seeing what trouble I can put them in and the strength that they’ll have to dig deep to get out. Writing for me is processing life, and I’m quite driven and goal oriented. I want to keep telling my stories, and I have to write them to make sure they’re available to be out in the world.
Jill: Do you have a specific writing process?
Mary: I write every day. Sometimes it’s fresh new pages, other times it’s editing. But I always have a project in process that gives me something to work on. When I’m drafting a novel, I basically write a chapter a day. That can be anywhere from 1200 words to 2000, but I do like to finish the chapter before I leave my desk for the day.
Jill: Do glaring errors in other mysteries irritate you?
Mary: Since I know how hard it is to write a book, I am pretty forgiving about most things. The fact that a writer sat down and got it done is huge and should be celebrated. But we’re writing fiction, and sometimes it’s more important to be in the story and in the characters and the relationships than whether someone gets a procedural thing right or wrong.
Jill: How do you conduct your research?
Mary: Ah the internet is my friend! But I also have a wonderful local detective that I bounce my ideas off and fact check most of my procedural aspects through. If need be, I pick up a phone and call specific experts in a field if I need more details than the internet can provide. People love to talk about what they do, so that’s always fun. Also, if I need to know a place, I get in the car and go. No matter how wonderful the internet is, there’s nothing like walking around a town for the sights and smells and sounds of it. And, of course, meeting the people who make up the community.
Jill: Are there lessons you hope readers will take from your books?
Mary: I want my readers to enjoy and be immersed in the story. Sure, I do often address social issues—houselessness, sex trafficking, etc. - but it’s more to shine a light on the issues. I often have my characters seeking to understand the why of those situations and I’ve been told by readers that it’s a great approach because it’s like showing you something without beating you over the head with it. Maybe if I can get a reader to think differently about a situation that looks one way but has much more depth than what’s on the surface of it, that’s a win.
Jill: Do you have a favourite marketing strategy?
Mary: Don’t be afraid to tell people you write and what you write. I’m an introvert, but I have the best time when I’m on a cruise ship or tour and people ask what I do for a living. I’m retired—so I could say that, but it’smuch more fun to say full-time author. I’ve had more invites to book clubs across the country just by telling people what I do and being excited about that. Word of mouth really is one of the best ways to sell your books. Also – have a nice website, so when you are talking about yourself, people have a professional place to go that makes you look like you are legitimate.
Jill: Tips/advice for budding mystery writers?
Mary: Have plenty of red herrings in your book, but always make sure they tie somehow into the main plot. And you always want to play fair with the reader. It’s a balancing act, but leave enough bread crumbs so that the reader can look back and think, yeah, I must have missed that but oh what a great twist!
Jill: What’s next for you?
Mary: Killer Tracks the third book in the Misty Pines mystery series will be out in September 2025. Beyond that, I’m contemplating a fourth book in that same series, and looking to get my other stories out in the world.
Thanks for chatting to us, Mary.
Kelly Pruett Mysteries
Derailed
Denied
Deceived
Misty Pines Mysteries
Hidden In Pieces
Deadly Tides
Killer Tracks
Non Series
Don't Ask, Don't Follow
Jill Amadio hails from Cornwall, U.K, like the character in her crime series, Jill was a reporter in Spain, Colombia, Thailand, and the U.S. She is a true crime author, ghosted a thriller, and freelances for My Cornwall magazine. She lives in Connecticut USA. Her most recent book isIn Terror's Deadly Clasp,